I do not make such genre i think i am getting older. I am still working on this, any help from people in this genre?

 

Apart from the vocal soaked into a large reverb...it sounds more like an old school synthpop

 

aint trance

 

 

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Start with this page at least lol
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trance_music

У тебя крутая, цепляющая, душевная, эмоциональная мелодия, но работы еще много.
Если ты хочешь транс, то ты должен переделывать с абсолютно другим BPM, добавлять бассы и до трансовой стилистики еще далековато...
Вообщем что писать, смотри тюториалы от начала до конца как пишут транс

 

I never said it was a Trance. The title is a Trance gone wrong, i know what a trance is
@yabiss thanks i found some tutorials on YT

 

Oh, understood... So this is experimental 'trance'.
In this case, i personally can't help.
In experimenting field noone can show you how do you see the track as the end product.
It will be your personal experiment with your experience in doing music.
If i would tell you change the drums to more shapier and compress them more, you will answer me that you are experimenting with exactly those you have picked drums

 

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@Peter Krav hi my friend nice to see you back online here
about the track if you're interested about my thoughts :
i feel it is good & i would like to listen it again without any drums imho just try it as is with no drums,every other element in & see if it gives you a different perspective,it is a beautiful track ,trance or not,music is music & thanks for sharing

 

All in all close to Kraftwerk (apart from that voice, of course), good.

 

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recipe for basic trance :
arps played with supersaw sounds
rolling bass lines : hi mid and low end
trance snappy kick
lots of delay and reverb
epic chords progressions

 

if you need to make a mix between synthpop and and trance have a listen to futurepop bands like this one

 

This is very intresting and thanks again i found some old school synthpop tutorials i never knew this genre i always make trance now i'll try to mix some stuff together, thank you.

 

Yes, initially i was aiming for that but after i changed the bpm a new idea came to me i made some drums and then i stuck in the process. As Yabiss pointed out the genre (synthpop) i found tutorials to continue! Anyway I am sure you know how to make a trance music потому что вы пишете на русском языке

ότι θέλει η ψυχή σου αλλά αύριο τώρα είμαι δουλεια φίλε μου!

 

this is only makes me wanna share my last work even tho i've abandoned Trance.

 

Yazoo, kraftwerk, and bit of depeche mode.... I like it. The progressing (panned) synth at 0:40 is nice. I like the tones of the synth beginning at 1:08 too. You have to work on your low end however.....

 

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Trance back at its roots (kinda..)