feedback please?

http://soundcloud.com/exs1/youngblood-hawke_wecome

 

Intro could grab some more attention, it's long enough to have more things happening, automation vise, just to build up everything till 0:47.

Don't know original, but i think it's maybe good thing, so I can really be objective, there is something, quite like it, hated vocal from start, but than I get used to it, it's remix for some track, so cool.

There is few places from 2:50 I didn't find likable, but they last short, so it's not a big deal

Overall interesting track

 

i liked it. kinda oldskool, not for everyone out there.

 

as a former producer/engineer for D.F.O. Records i can honestly say that overall pretty solid. vocals could be raised just a lil bit though

 

interesting dnb remix! Very good, but remember in dnb the drums should have a little diversity :D Keep producing!!!