Tools used:
Cubase
Waves
Gem
Nugen Audio
Fabfilter
Slate Digital
Nexus
Stylus RMX
Alchemy
Roland D-50
Korg M1

 

If it was me, I'd break up the chord sequence towards the end with a C major after 4 bars of the A flat. The A flat doesn't allow any suspension of the chord movement. Maybe alter the piano to a more staccato synth sound, but not to plucky. Think Faithless "Insomnia" and maybe some percussion?
But yes, it's a nice track.

 

She's pink like me.

 

My avatar says I am Pink. None more pink.

 

Flip a coin, one can be Pinky, the other Perky.

 

Meanwhile I made a Trance MIX. Tell me what you think.. Thanks!

 

Is it too loud?

For me it is a bit too loud, but it sounds good.

Sounds like maybe -8LUFS to -7LUFS in loud passages which for me is loud, but it doesn't do anything overtly nasty. I wouldn't want to listen to it more than once or a few times (my old man ears would complain and winge,) but it sounds fine for that.

BTW ++ love that analog hiss in the bed of the sound, it helps to allow you to get that loudness, and for me at least it sounds nice.

Good job man, well done indeed.

 

For me (Club Mix) it is a bit too loud on the higher pitched keys, listening on the laptop (small speakers and reflective surfaces) its painful at 49 in, had to hit the stop.

The Trance mix is working a bit better, still a bit loud and spikey but almost there, maybe pull it down a smidge?

 

Removed

 

I did work on the track a bit and tried to fix the eq as adviced by many users here. I'm not sure i succeded..

 

Last edited: Nov 10, 2017