I Have Something To Say

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Recoil, Oct 24, 2017.

  1. Recoil

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    Inspired by Alfred Hitchcock's old film.

     
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  3. spyfx

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    very nice intro Recoil,shakuhachi/flute part really love it,don't really like the "colour of the vocal",but that is a matter of taste,choir is super :like:,interesting tempo works fine here.
     
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  4. Satai

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    Great work. Needs demented mindwarping DnB or Venetian Snares breaks to go under those slow big drum grooves!
     
  5. Recoil

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    spyfx you have good hearing, vocal is very modulated and comes from Hitchcock's film. Thank you for listening. :goodpost:

    Satai I also thank you too for listening and comment :shalom:
     
  6. No Avenger

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    Interesting, not sure if I had heard something like this before (this is meant positive!).
    Quite slow, though I find 80bpm difficult. Too fast to be be really slow too slow to be "swinging". But that's maybe just my "problem".
    It's the first song in which I noticed that there are more low frequencies on 2 & 4 than on the 1 & 3 (due to the snare I guess). That irritates me a bit.
    I would enhance the voice by tweaking the values of pitch and formant but I know that can be tricky.
    I like the synth starting at 3:37,x, that's my cup of tea.
    All in all it's very creative and sounds targeted.
     
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  8. beatmagnus

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    Hmm, I can only trust my dick, and when I heer this song?.. He no move.. My deeek, My deek he sux.. Oh wait... He wants sux...
     
  9. Thankful

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    This entertained me. It's important to hold the listener's attention with a cinematic piece. Cinema music without the pictures or dialogue is meaningless to me; you have to assume that cinematic is so named because it's music made to accompany movie images. Very creative with the dialogue, although it was mostly incomprehensible apart from the 'I have something to say' and that sounds pitched down and not as effective as the original dialogue, but maybe there's a copyright issue you're trying to avoid (?). In short, very good but make the dialogue comprehensible. Oh and also give 'reasons' for why the music changes; the music just changes and as a listener you don't know why. Signposting these changes with something auditory, a bridge, an fx, an intake of breath, a riser/downer, anything and it would make more sense.
     
  10. Recoil

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    beatmagnus at least you have someone to talk and to play :wink:

    Thankful this is more electronic music, I treat the orchestral music quite differently, and the inspiration may be for me everything picture, memories or film.

    Thank you both for listening and comment.
     
  11. ned944

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    @Recoil Personally, I'm Diggin this, It has that Dark Demented Industrial Sound I Love. Most definitely would love to hear more like this. And I Can see the movie in my head, my friend. beautiful piece!


    You have Some Wonderful Music on your SoundCloud as Well! Mesmerizing piano piece.
     
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  12. No Avenger

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    yeah, sure. the sounds have more time to evolve and hence the low frequecies are slower they benefit from slow songs more than high frequencies at least because they don't :)

    check.
     
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