My progress in music since 2013

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Recoil, Sep 20, 2017.

  1. Recoil

    Recoil Guest

    Greetings i'm new on this forum, i'm not a musician and my English is very bad, i just want to present you one of my pseudo songs.

     
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  3. foster911

    foster911 Guest

    Great job, deserves Pulitzer Prize. Congratulations!:like:

    Not a fire line targeted on you but just a small criticism.
    The main flow of the track snags in 1:12 though the drums struggle to make connections between different parts. Instead of extending one part progressively, you've joined two unlike or less resembled ideas (not unfavorably contrasting) and the smooth current has been corrupted or defaced. Unfortunately this setback catches my ears immensely in most works. I suffer the same hassle.:dunno:
     
  4. Recoil

    Recoil Guest

    I have heard it many times from other music producers, this is how I compose, not complicated but I try to smoothly arrange the whole song, thank you for the answer.

    PS. I do not make money on my music, because it is my passion.
     
  5. MMJ2017

    MMJ2017 Audiosexual

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    its cool brother. you should do music for movies and tv shows for a living.
     
  6. Recoil

    Recoil Guest

    Unfortunately in my country, it is impossible to live with the production of music, although I am on the largest music forum with 8000 users. No one listens to the music I compose. Thx for reply.
     
  7. saltwater

    saltwater Guest

    not bad :)
    & :welcome:
     
  8. No Avenger

    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    Been pointed to this one by Recoil in his second thread that's why I'm a little bit late here.
    I like this one better.
    The transition at 1:12 is absolutely ok for me and the balance of the low frequencies on the different beats (1 & 3, 2 & 4) is common and this works better.
     
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