Greetings i'm new on this forum, i'm not a musician and my English is very bad, i just want to present you one of my pseudo songs.

 

Great job, deserves Pulitzer Prize. Congratulations!

Not a fire line targeted on you but just a small criticism.
The main flow of the track snags in 1:12 though the drums struggle to make connections between different parts. Instead of extending one part progressively, you've joined two unlike or less resembled ideas (not unfavorably contrasting) and the smooth current has been corrupted or defaced. Unfortunately this setback catches my ears immensely in most works. I suffer the same hassle.

 

I have heard it many times from other music producers, this is how I compose, not complicated but I try to smoothly arrange the whole song, thank you for the answer.

PS. I do not make money on my music, because it is my passion.

 

its cool brother. you should do music for movies and tv shows for a living.

 

Unfortunately in my country, it is impossible to live with the production of music, although I am on the largest music forum with 8000 users. No one listens to the music I compose. Thx for reply.

 

not bad
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Been pointed to this one by Recoil in his second thread that's why I'm a little bit late here.
I like this one better.
The transition at 1:12 is absolutely ok for me and the balance of the low frequencies on the different beats (1 & 3, 2 & 4) is common and this works better.