Have you heard something like this before?

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by foster911, Sep 7, 2017.

  1. foster911

    foster911 Guest

    :bleh:
    Please listen to it at least one time to the end. In some parts, notes' count is so high.


    ِDo you like it? If not, please devastate me by your criticism.:rofl:

     
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  3. rudolph

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    I´ve hear things like that many times before but not so boring. Thousands of notes and none interesting.
     
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  4. G String

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    Have you heard something like this before?

    Yeah, it reminds me of music. A bit. ;)
     
  5. Jeen

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    i heard something like this when i was a kid and playing on my Gameboy.... but i respect your inspiration
     
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    Heh. Synthwave fugue! Sounds a little bit like ur earlier work that veered into Castlevania territory. Srsly needs bass, guitar & piano, "real" instrument timbres? Also contrasting parts / dynamics?
     
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  7. Vaijj

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    Groove and beat is awesome, really love the crescendo and build up into the... eh.. well, melodies is kind of overrated any way or..?
     
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    Fuguewave :D
     
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    hell, the "ignore the needy kid" button doesnt work perfectly.
    I cant see his messages, ok, but i still see his bs topics on the front page
     
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  10. EddieXx

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    the only interesting thing with this is what it does for you.

    you seem to see/hear something in this beyond its obvious shortcomings.
    you have been making music for at least two years, in what way does this accomplish what you envisioned?

    it would be interesting if you showed some example of what you are aiming at
    are there any "great" examples of the kind of music you are trying to make?

    or are you just lazy.
     
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  11. tooloud

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    Variations on Bach's "Well Tempered Casio"
     
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  12. Sylenth.Will.Fall

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    Foster, you are to music what Picasso was to Captain of the Starship Enterprise!

    Now where are those razor blades I suddenly feel the urge to chew on?
     
  13. Your invention is perhaps not novel in that it breaks not new ground but definately worthwhile as an exercise to practice chordal voicings that you might employ if one day you pen a complete and "proper" song, to add subtle changes of feeling a second time around visiting a verse.
     
  14. Beth

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    It's hamster music isn't it ? :dunno:

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    @foster911 no devastation intended :wink:
     
  15. Moonlight

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    filter it dude and add a break beat :) than you get close to orbital :S
     
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  16. jynx

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    To my ears that screams commodore 64 or vic20..
    Ahh simpler times eh!
     
  17. Magic Mango

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    Pretty good clarity. What might work is adding some beats, disco bass and sidechaining the crap out of it Pryda style :O
     
  18. Seedz

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    Elements of early Tangerine Dream, probs the best thing I've heard from ya..........a spoken word dialogue by some geezer with a deep characterful voice over the top..

    Not the following script, but that kinda thing?

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    Time to die.
     
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  19. Wando Waiato

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    :deep_facepalm: uhhhhmmmmmmm.................:mad:
     
  20. Backtired

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    where's the beat
    and why you don't give a proper closing to the track, it looks like not even you are serious anymore about it

    but hey you're getting better
     
  21. dragonhill

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    It reminded me of Legend of Zelda on the original Nintendo.

    I do appreciate that you are trying a chord progression.
    A lot of it is 'the next note in the scale' syndrome that most guitar players also fall into.
    That is why intervals and more importantly utilizing the power of rests is important when writing a melody.
    I can hear you are exploring. Try some rhythmic repetition.

    Rest - the first thing we learn as a musician but often forget to utilize.
     
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