NDE - Work in progress

Discussion in 'Work in Process' started by Edwin., Aug 1, 2017.

  1. Edwin.

    Edwin. Newbie

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    Hey everyone,
    I wrongly posted this in our music - would love your feedback and suggestions on how to evolve this track :)

     
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  3. Jay Weed

    Jay Weed Ultrasonic

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    I would add a solo horn track, trumpet if you can find a decent patch. I probably say that because I hear this and the first thing I think of is Papa was a rolling stone.
     
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  4. TonyG

    TonyG Guest

    Edwin I like the mood you are trying to create, however, I find the snare sound and pattern distracting and annoying. Change snare sample and go for simple pattern. Sometimes less is more.
     
  5. Edwin.

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    Thanks guys I'll give the trumpet patch a go, I like that idea.

    And thanks Tony I actually started to think that too, it originally fitted with the original arrangement but I agree, I think it has something to do with the way it comes in too :)

    I'll have a go an changing it and re post soon :)

    Thank you both
     
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