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IMO Levels before 0:30 are not balanced enough. You should listen to the whole track in mono.

 

Last edited: Apr 22, 2017

I think that you more or less achieved what you were going for. The rimshotish sound gets a bit annoying and out of place throughout the composition. Mixing could be better, the kick gets muddy a lot.

 

Simplify! I think your track needs to be simplified. The melody is actually quite beautiful and needs much less 'playing like a guitar.' The melody becomes quite a mess in places actually because it over-complicates the beautiful melody. The beats/rhythm is also wrong; it needs to be much simpler. But the production and quality of the track is good. Keep working on it.

 

is that a metronome sample going on there?

 

Thanks for the comments. i am very happy that it qualified as a song. it is not a metronome sample, actually i am not even sure man. I just played over a loop (rmx) and edited the melody. I wanted to know whether the melodic phrases at different sections feels connected. The rhythm loop is actually 4\4 modified to 3/4.Any way thank u for taking your time to listen to the song.