It sounds like it's playing in the next room and I'm hearing it through the wall. Really poor mixing. And it takes too long to get to the point. And when it finally did, it wasn't very interesting.
I understand what you're trying to do here, I like the melancholic vibe but the first section up to 4.20 needs some high end information one shots / field recordings in order to relate to the rolled off vibe, I also think it gets a bit monotonous and the brain tunes out, knowing when to introduce the next element is key. but I do think it's heading in the right direction. sample @ 6.20 sounds out of time, not sure whats going on there! listen to this track, or maybe you already know it for reference! Last edited: Apr 15, 2017
greatly appreciated input! Heard Recondite before, thanks for reminding me, I see the similarity in terms of elements, haha. True, the lack of high information is quite apparent now that you have mentioned it. The "hearing it through a wall" effect is most likely due to overpoweringly muddy reverb and lack of high information. Again, thank you very much, I will take aforementioned feedback on board. You guys are great!
