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Discussion in 'Our Music' started by incognito, Jul 16, 2012.

  1. incognito

    incognito Noisemaker

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    Hey Guys,

    There's a song I'm working on and so far all I have is some music. I'd love to hear your thoughts and clear my head before I move any further.
    Here it is: http://playstopgo.com/temp/music/SomA-Raf.mp3

    I'd appreciate any comments.

    Thanks!
     
  2. One Reason

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    lol... without looking at the user name, I thought.. sorta sounds like Incognito's last song.. :rofl:

    I'm diggin it.. bring on some vocals :dancing:
     
  3. HebrewInTheRain

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    SomA-Raf... Like OR said add some vocals. I just downloaded it. It sounds great. Add some vox and if it sounds pretty good you should shoot for placement on Pandora radio. btw I downloaded it cuz ima sing to this in my bedroom - not lying.
     
  4. incognito

    incognito Noisemaker

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    Haha. Hey One Reason, I guess I'm starting to sound like me :) Thanks for the comment!

    Hebrew, I'm glad you like it. Maybe you can upload your version of the song. I'd love to hear it! As for Pandora radio I can't access it since I'm in Canada. Maybe you can help me submit it once I'm done?

    All the best guys!
     
  5. GanjaRa_

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    sounds relly nice but i think the leads could have some more effects and modulations

    hey, thats same fight i am into :)
     
  6. HebrewInTheRain

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    haha Yeah bro, I'll do both!
     
  7. incognito

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    GanjaRa, you're probably right. I'll play with it more once I have the vocal. I'm hoping to get more feedback from you then. Thanks for the constructive criticism!

    Hebrew, thanks! Looking forward to it!
     
  8. zspin.stomp.shuffle

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    aha this sounds like greenday, lonely road except for the electro parts. the verses anyway. i can give u a tip, keep writing dance not rock.
     
  9. incognito

    incognito Noisemaker

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    Thanks Dan, I'll stay away from rock :)
     
  10. Rolma

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    Very cool stuff....Sounds very lively and vibrant ....Yeah, agreed the vocals could help to splatter / splash it more (the energy)
     
  11. rimshooter123

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    definetely not my style but it sounds quite professionally arranged/produced. sounds and effects are chosen well... good overall mixture. keep it up!

    and @ "keep writing dance not rock" => :rofl: .. do what you want to do! :wink: restrictions are ":snuffy:".
     
  12. incognito

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    Thanks Rolma! I agree. Vocal should mix it up a bit.

    Rimshooter, thank you for the feedback. You're absolutely right about restrictions. I just found it amusing someone would regard my music as 'rock' :)
     
  13. BladeRunner

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    I like this overall mix of this...sounds good.

    I do concur about vocals---that would certainly enhance this.
     
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