check my tune if you please fellas n ladies

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by flowmika, Apr 29, 2013.

  1. flowmika

    flowmika Ultrasonic

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    see what you think if you dont mind
    https://soundcloud.com/bionic-people/no-one-receiving-resolution-is
    Please do tell me where it can be improved
     
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  3. bigboobs

    bigboobs Kapellmeister

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    Replace the bass, I don't like the actual one, it sounds cheap. The rest is ok so far...
     
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    Stanton P. Freed Newbie

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    Hi,
    even though it is not my favorite style , I think your track is rather pleasing to listen to.
    The mix is smooth, the voices fit. I think the brass section needs a little work : it is too much behind.
    And from a very personnal point of view, I think the track could be shorter (or trip a little more).

    :wink:
     
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  5. flowmika

    flowmika Ultrasonic

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    Cheers to you both I shall get some more done on this
     
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