http://soundcloud.com/mikemikeass/house-6

Hi Guys, This time I try to use deeper sound to compose the songs. I'm not doing well in the mastering currently but I would focus on the musical stuffs first, I hope at least it's listenable so I can move on to the mastering stage. Thanks for your listening and feedback

 

The baseline in the intro sounds like it's out of sync with the song, I don't know if you meant it to be that way or not but just an observation...Good solid kick drum and things sound clean, I do think the intro is a little empty though, you need to work on keeping interest throughout the song, like the effect at 1:02, yeah you need more of that. Nice switch up after the drop, very unexpected, kind of like old school house there, but again the timing of the bass synth is a little off, quantize the synths and then you can add some sing to them manually after that so you have more control, because there's a fine line between giving things swing by playing them manually and sounding kind of amateurish you know what I mean?

I think you did a good job with the production, I think you need to work on the composition more though, you have a good base and you should add more interest to it and more elements to make it more exciting

 

Bass seems like it's clipping too, or something is sounding funky at least lol. and I agree it does seem like it's out of sync in the intro. Nice house track though, I think once the mix becomes more solid and you bring up the channels that seem to be quieter; it'll start to become more solid. Shoot an update like to hear it again.

 

thanks guy! After I just a producer headphone to re-listen my track i figure out my baseline got some problems too, I can hear the sound when I was using my computer speaker with a sub woofer. It's kinda off beat due to I played it manually I guess. I should fix the length of the notes of the baseline next time! The advise from u guys are rly useful, means a lot to me.

 

what do you think about it

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