Hi, im back again with a rookie track again xD.. tell me what you think it needs to be improved or if its all trash :P

Many thanks for taking your time to watch this
Thanks CHeers :D


http://soundcloud.com/rwnd2/mixdown

 

That drop was long as Hell. Other than that, I dig the song. It's hot. I don't think you should ever let anyone tell you what to change in your track, unless you're working directly with the artist(s). Even though I think the drop was long.... If you like it, keep it. Good track.

 

First , I disagree with livelogiclooptools , asking for opinions or critics is highly recommanded to progress .


Let's start analyzing

First , I can hear clippings in the sound , try to compress the kick and limit the whole track , don't go above 0db.
Fix the pad , I can hear too much phasing and too much detune and little pitch , it doesn't match with the lead .
For the lead you used "Dbglitch" or maybe "grossbeat" , but to be honnest it sound very cheap , try making it more complicated add another lead above it tweek the cutoff to make the sound catchy
...Where is the bass ?

For the breakdown the pluck or lead try changing square to Saw and add more reverb and little delay , samething goes to the vocal , this part should be dreamy , delay + reverb = eargasm .

For the end its good to move from melodic to noisy , but it sound very basic and slow , i can't feel banging sounds , i can't feel bouncy sounds , dont be scared to make more noise !

Anyway , good job

Keep it up , Elias

 

yah, it's good

 

many thanks for your opinions :D

 

First of all good job. Not a fan of the vocals but an overall good track!

Personal Opinions:
1) Maybe use an ssl bus compressor to really glue all the sounds together
-this will also bring down some of those peaks in your intro beat section
2) I thought the drop could use a little extra "umphh"
-could potentially use a sine wave underneath 2 octaves down
3) great transitions, not to fast not to slow, especially like the use of the filter on the beat in the beginning to foreshadow a change
4) Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!