Just a radical critique. For these kinds of tracks with the melody as the crucial element, I don't hear much resolution so makes me feel wandering the crowded streets like a whore. I made below track some time ago, as you can hear it's full of resolutions:
https://audiosex.pro/threads/my-bassy-track-2.25041/

If you can put this issue (imo) right, your glaring works would shine peerlessly like a diamond.

 

Thank you for your criticism,Foster911! I am for it and I spread my tracks here!

 

Friends, ask for help! Recently I sent the track to the site, where music is sold. Yesterday refused without explaining why. Can you tell that I do not have? Thank you in advance for any response!