Hello guyz, i'm back after a long time ^^
check this out:

and this one too:

i need you feedback guyz, thanks in advance, luv y'all

 

hearts and brains?
ears and brains?

 

Fear contained

 

I never even noticed you were gone...

 

Hahah EARS* sorry, it was a mistake from my part
Ears for listening
Brains for criticize

 

Ok, cool, that's all you have to say ?

 

You don't want to get me started. One word...pizzagate

I have no interest in Taylor Swift so I'm not going to push the play button. Maybe next time.

 

Well, I have no interest in Trolls so i'm not going to answer you, maybe next time, or never ;)

 

that was Stevie Wonder instead of Taylor Swift?

 

I really loved your underground one. No critique from my side. So good!

Demonstrating and also bearing out the dark side of life that without it, the life would be so boring and meaningless.

 

Nice trap. I think you might have another typo TYLOR-TAYLOR

 

I thought you had some thing to say
some place you had to show me
A novel place where I thought to dream
but in this space I faltered
Within, without, I turned myself around,
the vista shades of bleached out white
But all too soon I fell asleep to sound.

 

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Thanks for the feedback, appreciated

Thanks ^^ , Next typo will be Miley Crushedyrus