First of all, very nice track. Sound choices are cohesive and the arrangement is well done. Overall, its just very well put together. If I were to critique on any one particular thing is that I thought it could be a bit longer but thats purely subjective. Btw, I had an opportunity to listen to a few other tracks on your soundcloud account, really nice stuff.

 

Gives me that kind of Boards Of Canada Feeing

 

Nice one, nice sounds, good composition. Nice use of dynamics, well done.

 

Nice ambient vibe to the track. You obviously put a lot of work and thought into making it and you've done a good job. Well done.

 

Change those shitty nexus preset binary voice.

 

Nope....
Just to have more plays....

 

Really nice track. Actually I was waiting till the end to log in so it would not pause the song... and it's a big compliment.

 

I think the drums and maybe even the entire low end all together could be a bit tighter. Probably some more sidechain compression as well to help with all of that, especially at the 2nd part the drums come across as if they're drowning. I also feel like this track is somewhat overloaded within the mid-high frequencies. This could obviously very well be all artistic choices in which case I haven't said a single damn thing. But that's my subjective opinion and that's what I would go back to and look at to see if I can change it for the better.

Almost forgot, I like the composition and arrangement and a good song mixed at an average level will still always be better than a shit song that is beautifully mixed. So I'd say you are most definitely on the right track.