Hello and thank you in advance. I've just written a new text I'd need someone to tell me if it's correct, or too simple, or just how it sounds to an english/american. English is not my language obviously.
I'd send it in a conversation, if you don't mind. That's not complex, 2 verses, prechorus, chorus. Ok... Thank you.
Feel feel to move the post to a proper section, I've found this one the more appropriate.

 

I ve been helped in private conversation
by 2 kind members
it s been cool too

just to say it lol

thank you both