Hi AudioSex,

this is my new track.
I want some criticism or advices.



greetings

 

In some parts bass is to loud and goes to much infront of other insturments! or my speakers play mind games on me

 

The vocal parts are blurred, you could get a better result if you highlights it.

 

melodic glitch-pop? i dig it. compression and delay should be added/tweaked across the board, but the song itself is cool. the reverse vocal reverb thing is good, but maybe done a little less and tweaked a bit more? just saying for the sake of constructive criticism. pretty good composition though!

 

I love it. Particularly after 4 minutes in. That break was nice.

 

Thanks for the reply man!
Is it the bass that is too loud or the voice that is to soft?
Can you tell me where at what minute exactly or is it overall in the track.
I would definitely much bass in the track
I have made this track on a cheap head and want to fix this track to learn more

Also Thanks for the reply!
what do you mean witch Highlights?
Highlight like sidechain?
Or just more volume?
Or maybe to silence the other parts?
would learn more

Thanks for the reply MrMister!
so it's called melodic glitch-pop ;-)

Thanks E-Minor!

 

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I mean the vocal parts seems in the background (imo too much) and some energy goes lost. I suggest you to watch some videos (Bobby Owsinski's 1176 Tricks), the 2nd (~4:15 mins) is really interesting.

 

Last edited: Jun 13, 2016

Thanks man! Good stuff!
I think i need a realy good New headphone ;-)
i have made the track on a headphone which was included with my laptop.
I had been saving up for the akg k712 pro.
But think I'll buy it faster now ;-)

 

Let me suggest an alternative: Grado sr60e (whatever you'll buy, try to test it before open your wallet)

P.S.
I listen to your track using it:

(Bose Companion® 2 serie III)​

 

Last edited: Jun 13, 2016

It's get interesting.
i Have made them on this headphone https://s.s-bol.com/imgbase0/imagebase3/large/FC/5/3/7/2/9200000048722735.jpg
i have realy the focus on the akg 712 pro because the range of 10 Hz - 39.8 kHz.
And i read about a natural sound and i can buy it for €297,-
the only thing is that i have to ride 2hour for a shop where i can try it
but i will try to check you suggestion too man!