http://soundcloud.com/larski/oblivion-thats-it-drunken-1

 

Call it "Spirals" or "Pixels".
I'd used some more monstrous bass. Kind of Skrillex on 'Scatta'. But that's just personal taste.

Very nice track indeed.
Keep on it, man!

 

Thanks for the input! I've produced this one on headphones and seems I don't have much experience on it and the mix ended lacking in the sub area. Comparing it to other Dubstep it really seems to lack a bit of lowend, nevermind the computer choking (2g is really little to run Lion).

 

A lot of work went into this track, I can hear that. Congrats!

On my cheap headphones it sounds good but I can't compare to commercial dubstep on my internet-pc.

If you want to add more subbass, you could use Voxengo LF Max:

LF Max

I think there's a cracked version out there. But remember that your song will start to distort easily when you want to master it loud with lots of subbass. Another way is giving the illusion that the bass sounds loud by using sidechain (when the music ducks for the bass, it can give the impression that the bass is huge) or add distortion to the bass.

 

Thanks for the input fella!

 

interesting track!
maybe not perfect but kinda addictive. I especially like the last part starting at 5:10 min. awesome shit!