Hope you like it. Still not a full track but IMO, not bad. What do you think?
Thanks!

 

Re-think the intro (i don't like that kind of organ) and the piano sounds un-natural (e-piano?).

 

Last edited: Apr 12, 2016

Where is @kouros?

 

Yes, I agree with you. Intro sucks and needs a smarter work and about the piano and rhythm guitar, I just wanted to more focus on composition side.

I programmed this track in 12 hours with all of the extra tasks. I love your style, if you like collaboration I can give my FLP for your manipulations or anyone who is interested in. My pleasure.

And once again thanks so much for your generous comment.

 

Let your creativity free and breakup the composition chain. Take a break. When you'll be ready spend time developing "Piano Melody", it's interesting.

At this time I'm preparing to build my new production PC (64-bit finally), and is hard waiting until the PC environment will be ready (hoping all the hardware components are ok) to install two DAWs, 50+ VSTs and set it one by one.

 

Last edited: Apr 13, 2016

It's too busy in some places, so it sounds like everything is fighting to be heard at the same time. I did notice that you implemented the call response advice I gave you, but try not to do it all one in a row though.

 

Sounds cute, funny, and playful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D

 

Reminds me of the sort of stuff you hear like on TV on a break like your program will begin in 50 sec

Each to their own & at least its something creative so cool, nice one