Please guys, I need your feedback!

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by DG Wyler, Mar 30, 2016.

  1. DG Wyler

    DG Wyler Newbie

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    Whats up guys, I'm really trying to improve my skills, so if you guys could give me some feedback about my new track it would help me a lot. Any tip worths a lot, it could be about mix, master or even about arrangement. I'm really counting with you. Here's my track:



    Thanks in advance guys!!! :)
     
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  3. hbss

    hbss Noisemaker

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    Okay, nice track, sounds good in general but:
    The lead is a bit repetitive, if you could write some variations the track would improve significantly.
    You could give a bit more of movement to the lead automatizing some settings from the synth, and making them evolve with time. (Ex; detune, spread... you know)
    Also, and thats just my taste, i would work in some harder transient for the kick, at least after the drop. I would made it hit harder, maybe even some distortion, but again, just my taste.
     
  4. lexeed

    lexeed Platinum Record

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    RIght off the bat: more low end. Just not feeling the bass and this song screams for it.
     
  5. LZ Jaydon

    LZ Jaydon Producer

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    I do agree on the low end, other than that I wouldn't mind some more texture in the buildup.
    I really like the breakdown though.
     
  6. midi-man

    midi-man Audiosexual

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    Bass is better at 1:00 on my Sony MDR-V6. Mix sound good and clean to me though. Well balanced.
     
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