what do you think on my new track

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  1. mm5

    mm5 Member

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    will be happy to have some comments on my track


     
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  3. mm5

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    comments, anyone ?
     
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    Nice start. Maybe think about adding a melody and some modulation. Even as chill music, repeated arpeggios can only go so far.
     
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  5. mithat

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    Liked your work..
     
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  6. mm5

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    thanx guys for your support and comments
     
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  7. stoiximan

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    This sounds only like an intro.You need to take it further.
     
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  8. thegerman1220

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    Sounds good. I liked it. The lead guitar (?) seems to dominate a little too much. Maybe bring its volume down a bit or use some master compression to bring out the other instruments....

    I agree with the comment above, add some variation to the sounds, especially the lead....maybe do a break-down keep the listener engaged and guessing
     
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  9. Herr Durr

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    yeah needs more development.. some nice elements.. but sounds sort of like radio show bumper music...

    the white noise was interesting.. wonder what you used for it..

    agree with @thegerman1220 about the break down or interlude...
     
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  10. mm5

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    i guess you are all, right,
    i tried to keep the same vibe all along without ups, downs and breaks, just keep it all the same, in repetitive mood feeling chill like, without sounding to boring.
    as oppose to my older tracks on soundcloud that are far more heavy and changeable.

    Herr Durr the white noise is a sample in Maschine- lone forest -bipolar kit -noise bipolar worked a bit.
    the drums are from this kit and all the rest are my guitar recorded with guitar rig on top all.

    thanx again for the comments
     
    mm5, Jan 23, 2016
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