::: Here is my work. What y'all think? :::

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  1. Tacio

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    Hope y'all like it. :::
     
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  3. One Reason

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    Its not setting my world on fire but better than most stuff posted here iMO, I can tell you have put as lot of work and effort into it. Well done :like:

    My main criticism would be to add vocal harmonies that are are more creative and interesting than just an octave up or down.

    Keep it up!
     
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  4. midi-man

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    At first I was scarred to listen to theses I thought it was going to be more RAP music glad I listened it was music.

    it's way much better than most tracks uploaded. It does need some Harmonies which would be great and some additional tweaks.
    Great job hard work noted on making these..
     
  5. insaner

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    Damn i like your first song very much, love it, more of that style.
    Yelous of you because you have the whole package, playing guitar/piano, sing, and write/produce.
    Wish i could sing, maybe i should start learning :D
    Keep it up!
    If you have FB/Soundcloud i am going to follow you ofc.
    Thanks!

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    Ow your first song is a cover? from which, if so kind a bummer.


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    I found the original heheh^^

    Sorry to mess your thread but why in this day of age (well it is/was always there) people cover/ ripping so much? Be creative and look in your own heart and write your own song/lyrics... gosh be original....i know its better to steal a good idea then creating a bad idea.

    But i think people want fame and money. I would want it to but i am staying in my own zone if its never going to be something i dont care, all i wanna do is make music, dont care with what and how there are many ways to be happy. Oke i would love to have many people listn to my music but actually how many would really care in a honest way. They would have to interpreta and feel in some sort the same way i do and its the hardest thing to not inspire people but to move people emotionally.

    Good luck
     
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  6. e-minor

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    Loved the first video as well. I also wished it wasn't a cover since reading the above post. Either way, you're incredibly talented. Keep it up. It's good stuff!
     
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    good stuff!! keep up the good work
     
  8. Tacio

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    Thanks for the tip bruh. I'll work more on vocals. :like: Have a great week. :wink:
     
  9. Tacio

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    Thanks bruh, it means a lot to me. Have nice week :wink:
     
  10. Tacio

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    Thanks brah. I'm glad you like it. Have a great day n a great week :wink:
     
  11. Tacio

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    Thanks fa the love "Insaner" I agree with everything you said. People need to be more "creative" .... Write more,instead of just doing only covers. It's not all 'bout the money or fame. :like:

    I wish you all the best bruh. Thanks again.

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  12. Tacio

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    Thanks for the tip bruh, I'm glad to read that. I'll work on some new harmonies :wink: Hope you have a great day n a nice week.
     
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    the first track is outstanding. Love the way it builds. Well done. :wink:
     
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    Hi,
    Talent shining trough with Immortality! Very nice song!
     
  15. Kookaboo

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    "Can you feel my Heart" sounds fine. :winker:
    The text is very important i.m.o.
    *Immortality* and *93 Million Miles* are also good!
    *93 Million Miles* is my preferred. :wink:
    Well done bro.
     
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    Nice... :wink:
     
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    Well done Tacio - Good songs and well produced! :wink:
     
  18. Tacio

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    Thanks bruh, it really means a lot to me. Have a nice day. :wink:
     
  19. Tacio

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    Thank u very much my friend. I'm glad you like it. Best regards. :wink:
     
  20. Tacio

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    Thanks bruh, ur feedback is very important to me. Hope u have a great day n a great week. :winker:
     
  21. Tacio

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    Thanks bruh :wink:
     
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