my last work...

 

Last? You given up?

I was expecting something to "drop" (to a steady rhythm), but the intro just goes on and on throughout the track. It's also fluctuating too much in rhythm for my taste, like it's not quantized correctly (or not sync'ed LFO on the bass).
Idk. I'd rather have a more "arranged track" than a collage of funny/weird samples and noises.

 

Last edited: Jan 11, 2016

Bass it's not quantized correctly that's right and I wanted random / + or - aleatory to give him the strangeness like the voices. Tanx for your reply...I experiment lot

 

Total piece of shit.. you wanted ruthless right?

I'd suggest you create more rhythm/movement, drops, rise etc in your compostion..
Also mid range is quite harsh and perhaps it also needs some volume automations..

But congrats on your final product. Atleast you finished something..

 

No not finished but i am ok with you...much work for me..tanx !

 

There was nothing on here that catched my attention, even not after 1,5 minutes. I didn't even reached the end of the song. Sorry...

 

I had better not even start.

 

Damn I needed a laugh today
c'mon man

 

I kinda liked it in an avant garde sense.

 

i wont even listen to it. Thats how bad it is

 

I went to your soundcloud monsieur, the most ruthless thing I have to say right now is.. I liked your other stuff better..

 

Cmon.. dont be like this.. this is awesome from 3.21 and on.

 

exact as baxter said the first post... i am an impatient cunt so i gave your song about a 10 sec skip
through... take it or leave it... great production yada yada yada.. but that baby needs BEATS .. go back & listen to
some 96' drum & bass Doc Scott etc... I'm not suggesting you change the make up of your music, just you could place an element or 2 on top of what you have.... and well

 

U got it..

 

Okay @One Reason, I died laughing at this one !! The OP doesn't know you just spared his life lol.

 

Try for subjective feedback… is it interesting? Anything you like about it? What suggestions would you have for…? Etc.

Definitely experimental, this is fine because it allows you to experiment without confinement or preconceptions of what your music should be like. Sort of contradicting that, it would make a world of difference if you chucked some DnB beats in the mix because it already has the bass and atmosphere leading towards that style; at the start of the track anyways

 

For a first post... this looks SUSPICIOUSLY like the OP.

I could be way off....

Maybe too ruthless..just sayin'.

 

Last edited: Jan 14, 2016

Ruthless huh? Well I didn't like it, but it was head and shoulders over those three little insignificant toerags that keep insulting me, then blaming me for attacking them.

 

haha nah mate, way off, less caffeine in the daily

 

eh....oook.