Started this new [Rock/Metal] track a few days ago and I just wanted some opinions on it. Like if its good enough to write a whole song around this chorus riff. So tell me what you think good or bad I take everything into consideration.

http://soundcloud.com/n9n3t33n/broken-wings

 

I likes keep it up dude! Finish dat shit i want to hear a whole song. Dont let a good riff go to waste. everything else is on your arrangement. Shine on these bitch's

 

cool riff, def worth finishing. Very catchy melody

 

Thanks, This is actualy the 54th song started in the past 3 months and out of the box is seemed to be rawring. Hopefully I can perfect it now and snag a great singer so I can get this album recorded.