Hi guys, my first ever song, using Ableton.

I would be grateful if you could listen and give me your opinion, thank you.



Have a nice weekend.

 

Hey,

I think that the lead synths are too loud, especially between 0:55 and 1:20. It overpowers the drums/kick. And the kick is so important in this genre.

The kick needs more low frequencies. Layering it with a 909 kick could be a solution. There's not enough goin on udner 80 Hz to make it a powrful kick.

I liked the voices and screams, makes it haunting in a good way. Yeh speedup of tempo at the end adds to the suspension, great idea!