I like it. I'd like it even more if the heavy reverb on the intro was hi-pass filtered and, perhaps, a slightly longer delay on its early reflections.

Vinyl f/x on the intro might be a nice touch.

 

That's it. I'm outahere.

 

Musicality? What do you mean by that? Listen to below loop and tell us what you get from it. Then compare it with yours. What should be present in a track to tell it's musicalier that the other? This loop has which of them? Geniuses, please help. My problem too.
http://www.mediafire.com/listen/c7di9wo6c7zo1hi/Solar+Enemy+-+Welcome+To+Hell.mp3

 

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lol.

i tell you what. i'll give the feedback you asked for, but you won't like it.

to me, it sounds like you have taken two very similar 2.5 seconds long snippets of "music", glued them together into a 5 seconds long piece of music, and repeated it over and over 1.5 minutes while passing it through various effects. whatever happened to songwriting? whatever happened to music taking you somewhere? i feel so sorry for young people these days growing up with this stuff.

as for clarity - to me it sounded like i had thick woolen mittens on my ears.

 

PLEASE STOP SCREAMING

 

Hey mmd which DAW you used this to flourish?

 

Ok... Bruh I am not going to put you on Blast. I have been where you are when I first started out. Let me also say that I create the same genre of music that you do which I think is very important as far as getting feedback beyond others opinions here that probably don't like the genre we create anyway. Not all the comments were off though. What I will say is that it's just way to repetitive in structure and I understand why too. You found some sounds that you really liked and you kind of just let it ride so to speak. I get it. From here I have a few questions of my own outside of the technical aspect. What DAW are you using and how long have you been building with it? Are you using stock plug-ins or VST's you got from.... well wherever? Considering we are conversing here you have so much at your fingertips it can be overwhelming. If you would like to continue this conversation on some real ish... hit me up at [email protected].

 

Hey man,

Cool sound. I think that major EQ Adjustments could be made to clean and clear this thing up. The movement in the track is cool, again using EQ to give each element its own space would make this track 10X better. Get one of those frequency charts and then see where each element of your track fits on to the chart.

 

i rather like the repetiveness off the track. it could sound better to take some of the mids down on the pianoloop after the intro

 

Thanks for the feedback guys even the negative ones.

The whole track was made in maschine , I usually compose in maschine and mix on ableton but in this case I did everything in maschine.

Most the stuff I used on this track are either from Komplete , fafilter or arturia.I may have used a stock filter from maschine .

 

not really fair for you to ask for feedback and then downrate the people who give you honest feedback just because you didn't like what they said. if you ever ask for feedback again, i hope nobody responds. i know i won't.

 

Ok... That's what's up. Check out IK Multimedia's T-Racks package. Has some really good plug-in's and presets. I use them on every track I make now. Just remember this whole process is a learning experience... I learn something new every day. Keep banging them tracks out! I also started following you on SoundCloud too.

 

I wouldn't have downrated your comment if it had one bit of constructive criticism in it.What you did was make fun of something I spent time on. I understand that music is a matter of taste .And please don't respond to my future posts.

 

Thanks for the love man its appreciated.i will follow you back

 

IT'S TRIPPY AS FUCK ! WHY ARE WE SCREAMING AGAIN?

 

keep up the good work !

 

It think this was very contructive, clear and well explained. Cant see why such things should be rated down. If someone ask for opinions about the music then expect to hear the truth from each and everyone that takes the time to listen. This voting up and down i dont get anyway so feel free to down vote this aswell. I mean since im on the same track as Realitybytez. Many things could be called music and we all like diffrent things. Maybe people as me are dinos that think composing music is more than a hook melody that repeat itself every 5-10 second. Its just diffrent kind of sounds delivered in a diffrent package..

But i shall also say i kind of like the hook.. maybe i use it that aswell kidding

Take care kids and Be safe okej..

Vaijj

 

Are these stuttering effects wanted or are they sound drop-outs?
Sorry but to my ears it sounds very annoying, got signals from my brain that something's missing, chopped.
Musicality – repetitive I'd say...maybe it would do fine for a Gangsta RAP-song.

BTW: THE USE OF CAPITALS ONLY looks as if you try to scream and command.

 

wow you guys give out the worst constructive criticism