Remix/Bootleg I made of dada life's happy violence, check it out, let me know what you think
http://soundcloud.com/eklypse-1/dada-life-happy-violence

 

I like it... *yes*
But at 1:14 I hear the kick glitches

 

I like it too,, but the kick it too heavy in the track... takes away from the energy...

 

The vocal is aaaaaall over the place.

I love the original too much to even consider liking another remix! Has potential though.

 

yeah was my first time actually using vocals in track, wanted them to be glitchy and stuttered

 

glitchy and stuttered is fine by me, I love that style. The thing is, the vocals are out of sync timing-wise. Vocal track and your music are two different tempos.

 

Not a bad piece of work and good potential, but I have to agree with Paus on liking the Original too much...
The Original is super fat and there are also very big remixes out there. So another attempt to make it big isn't probably the right way in this case...
Don't get me wrong, I like what you`re doing but I think for this one a little different style would be a better fit after all thats out there.
To make this better as it is, maybe stronger stutters and glitches would actually help this one. Your going crazy at the end... Do it more! ;)