Hi,
I'm trying not to post just demos, but as it happens, I only post here when I want your suggestions.
And today is not an exception.
I've written this little sketch for 24-piece choir, which will be part of another track. Do any of you have suggestions whether I should alter the mixing, or does it sound all right as it is?
Thanks

 

I hear something like distortion at 0:39-0:41... And at some other parts, like around 0:49-0:50.

Overall, I guess it's ok. You could tighten it up a bit and make it drier but it's a matter of taste if anything.

 

I don't hear anything in those regions, maybe those are just Soundcloud's compression artifacts.

 

I think the tenors need to be pulled a little closer towards the centre of the stereo image.

 

There's some empty space on purpose, to be filled up with orchestra later on in the piece.

 

Ah! I see what you're doing there. Nice one!