Hey,
Would be nice to hear your feedback!
Thanks a lot!

http://soundcloud.com/the_auditory/get-what-you-need-remix

 

The rhythm of the vocals does not match the music at all.

 

I would have to agree, based on your drum set up and sync the vocals are off, unless this is your intention?
You need more punch in the base as well as mids. This is unless you are going for a thin house sound?
Either way, its always a learning process......

 

Yeah, agree with the vocals.
Prob better chopping them up a bit and dropping them in on the beats. Just use a few of them so people get the hook in their heads.
Music sounds fine.

So what did you use? Daw/plugs etc?
How long did it take you?

 

thanks for your comments @ Alexander , SUPERSUKEBE , hyem77


listen to often to this track so i dont heard it!
now deleted the vocal line.

@ SUPERSUKEBE
wasnt my intention.
I Will work on my mix.
Just eq on the mastern to boost the mids ?


@ hyem77
I used logic express 9
I took about 5-6 Hours

 

Nice tune mate, I like it.
Cut those vocals up so you have 4 or so one-shots. Drop them in and this will be massive

 

Actually a nice melody and some nice build ups. I think you should vary your sounds a bit more though and make it "fuller" sounding in general.
Have the drums and the bass punch out a little more at times. You should gel your main sound layer together and take a look at the frequency ranges of all the sounds.
If you improve those sounds a bit and get a good master this thing could be a banger! Avicii and the SHM would be proud ;)

 

@hyem77
Thanks a lot! I will try your tips! Sounds very good!

@Towa22
Thanks a lot too for your great comment and advice!
The biggest work in producing is Mixing and Mastering.
Learning,learning and learning
Do you have any tips for the Masterbus?
I tried the Vitange Warmer who Works Good

 

I actually get my mix done without putting anything on the master bus. Sometimes I put a good limiter, or a maximizer on there, to hear how the sound changes.
I normally get my mix done with about 4-6dB of headroom. I just put my volume up and make it as good sounding as possible. My bass and drums go out to a buss with ssl bus compression and I tend to use new york compression on my kick and bass sounds!
After I got the mix the way I want it I bounce it down to audio and reimport it to do a rough master.
Therefore I generally use Ozone 5, sometimes ProQ, Alchemist and Flux Limiter. Not all together for sure...just what works best for the sound. Vintage Warmer is always a nice one to go to, but I personally don`t have it in my repertoire. SSL channel strip is also nice...

I think I´m going to upload a new, more dance like song next week, where you can see how this sounds like. And I can describe what I used and how I used it. If I`m ready and you`re interested I can make a before/after clip to show the effect of certain plugins.

But after all that said... when you got your mix the way you want it you should get a professional master at least once and hear what they are able to do. It also helps to figure out how to do it yourself and get better self masters of your tracks.