This is my first track, supposed to be trance.
I will appreciate your feedback.
Thx.

http://soundcloud.com/victorsaf/fields-of-white

 

Im surprised at how clean it sounds for your first track, congrats.
My first was 100 times muddier
I only really flicked through it but it seems like a pretty good start to production. The arp and keys annoyed me a bit but thats just a matter of taste I guess.
Keep learning and keep up the good work.

 

What hardware/software did you use?

 

to slow........needs to be at 136-140,
poor choice of patches to..

 

It's not bad at all for a first try.

I think the song is a bit boring over time, tbh. Try to change something every 4 or at least 8 mesures. Adding or taking away an instrument or change something about your midifiles, adding notes, or taking a few away. It will keep the attention of the listener.

 

Hi Zenarcist,

I used Logic, Nexus, Sylenth and Omnisphere
MacBook Pro 2.3 Intel Core I5, 8GB

 

Thx Barn,

I know it's too slow, it's 120.
I started the project to discover Logic and I built on it till I managed to get a track.
During the process I got used to 120 and didn't bother me till I actually listened to it after a few days' pause.

Can you suggest some patches that will do better, maybe?
I have nexus, sylenth, omni

Thx

 

Thx a lot manducator.
I will take your advice and I shall come up with version 1.1 :D

I appreciate your income, guys!

 

Thx for the encouraging, Monsanto!

 

Like Monsanto said, it sounds 100 times better than my first track. Test how it sounds with the bpm a little higher, like 126-128. If you go up to like 140 it will get a happy hardcore vibe. Also, spend a day watching/reading tutorials about compression. Once you understand the basics, put one on a track, tune it, repeat.

It might sound a little better if you bring down the reverb of your synths and add it back in via mixing it with a reverb send.

One more little thing to help clean up the sound. Add high or low pass filters and gently dial them in to get rid of excess sound.