new hip hop beat

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by keeron, Jan 14, 2012.

  1. keeron

    keeron Newbie

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    hey people check the new beat feedback welcome ...

    i made this in fl studio ..

    http://soundcloud.com/i-v-beatz-bb4d/i-v-beatz-n-y-a
     
    keeron, Jan 14, 2012
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  2. Davey Jones

    Davey Jones Producer

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    The beat is straight. The dynamics are off a bit. Needs better mixing. Keep making more, bro. Not too bad.
     
    Davey Jones, Jan 14, 2012
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  3. rimshooter123

    rimshooter123 Noisemaker

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    i like the atmosphere, but i don't like that mix.
    there is absolutely no dynamic, everything (except the drums) sits in the stereo center and sounds like mono, the orchestral parts sound really weak and synthetic... no punch, no nothing!

    maybe you should spend i little more time making ya beatz. but in that way you waste a lot of energy and good ideas. :sad:

    my opinion...
     
    rimshooter123, Jan 14, 2012
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  4. lyric8

    lyric8 Producer

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    sounds like a yellow wolf beat *yes*
     
    lyric8, Jan 14, 2012
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  5. keeron

    keeron Newbie

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    thank you for the comment bro... i like it when i get tips and advice ... thanks alot bro .. thanks for the advice
     
    keeron, Jan 15, 2012
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  6. keeron

    keeron Newbie

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    thank you for the comment bro.
     
    keeron, Jan 15, 2012
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