Hey guys,
it's me again.

Have a listen to our latest creation and tell me what you think about sound design/composing/mix/master.
We are also working on some new songs that a nearly finished and maybe your comments improve our final decisions for getting the most out of them!

Thanks and have fun!

 

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To start off I really like the into with the vocal FX and also how the song builds up with the synths and fx. Overall, the mix is quite well balanced. I do have a few comments that might help blend things a little better

1) Intro: Try cutting at around 1000Hz on the vocals in the intro section to make them blend in the background a bit better. 1-2 dB should do it.

2) Piano at at 1:32: Give the piano some delay to give it a more ethereal feel which I think is what you're going for in that section, because the section does feel a bit empty. Some nice effects would also fill out that section nicely as well along with the delays on the piano.

3) Love the percussion work at 3:07. Although i do think this section is too long, and lacking in excitement. You started off strong so you don't want to kill the energy in the track. OI think you should keep it to 16 bars and then transition into the section that starts at 3:51 right away and then into the final section which I love but also think might be too long.

Great job overall, very good balance of instruments and nice use of the vocal effects.

 

Hi fuad,
thanks for that great help! This evening i will tweak it a bit like you said and then upload it again tomorrow =)
There really good ideas. I really like the second one, I was thinking all the time: damn this section is really the weakest, but after such a long time my brain was empty and used to it. I will play around and try to improve it!

again thaaank youu!