Hey Guys,
Once again i need your helpful feedback!
Iam not sure about this track , is it good or is it **** ?
would be great to hear your opinion.

http://soundcloud.com/the_auditory/momentum-original-mix

 

Hi man
It's really great I think. The chords are very powerfull !
Can you tell us how you processed the Drums and this Pluck synth ? :dancing:

Do you use FL studio, Ableton,... or something else ?

 

well done *yes*

 

Please add some more change to the second part.
To similar to the first one...

...thumbs up so far...!

Sounds good, even on my crappy speakers on my second PC.

 

Sounds like it could be a track from Inna (without the vocals obviously). Good stuff.

 

Definitely not ****. Not my preferred style of music, but it sounds real good. All the audio is nice and clear.

Since you want input. Two creative ideas I had while listening; the popping roll sounds too much like a mouth beat box (HATE THOSE), I would replace it with another (clav?) sample. Also, with that same noise, after the build up, make use of a couple alternate patterns to keep it fresh.

 

its not my type of music but that dose not matter the quality and production sounds good though nice job

 

Before you "produce" it anymore. It needs a frickin' melody!!!

 

agree that it needs a melody check out my tracks to get some ideas (http://soundcloud.com/system-v) trance is what i do also add some sidechaining to give the track some life i think wot you have done is grate basis for a grate track just keep on adding to it ! good luck dude..

 

You know what would actually be great, get your hot sister/cousin/girl next door/classmate to whisper some random french text over it and maybe sing a few lines. Process them well and voila, no need for yet another synth playing some melody nobody's interested in.

 

like y not !!!

 

Hi i dont liked the percussions... !! really poor, good soul and chords... the sinth on the brake sounds amatorial

you can use the same midi notes in the others vst...and in others octaves to add dinamic and more life in your track


sorry for my poor english


success

 

thanks for your advice! i will try it out my new producitons.

 

Maybe it needs some new melodies but in this track i like the pure Chords.
But thanks for your advice .

 

Great production work

Not really my style of music, but with a good singer on board this could easily be a track that would go down well in clubland

Well, i say clubland, although ther last time i went to a club was when they were playing josh wink '0)

Good work though man

 

OMG noooooooooo *no*
i lost count of how many top dance tunes were ruined by putting some stupid bints warbling's all over them

 

Really good sound production, but you should try something more unique ... it sounds a little like "Deadmau5 Construction Kit". The chord progression is quite generic and boring... in my ears.
Sorry!