My first track

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  1. Zman

    Zman Newbie

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    It's my first track and i would like to hear some opinions about the sound quality and mixing stuff. I accept any kind of comment, good or bad, so don't worry. The track has some vocal parts from a youtube video , i did almost anything i could to make it decent but the quality of the vocal it's not that great. The vocal it's in romanian language so don't mind that to much, i would like to hear more about the intrumental. Thank you for your time !


     
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  3. esa666

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    interesting:)
     
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  4. fraifikmushi

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    Yes, interesting indeed!
    I could make out a break or any other structural elements in the arrangement apart from the intro.
    Also, there is a fundamental lack of bass.
    That's where I would start to work on.
     
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  5. Zman

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    well, i guess my room needs some treatment because to me sounds fine, also the bass it'd made from the same sample as that violin thing 'cuz i didn't want to lose the theme. anyway, thank you for your opinion.
     
    Zman, Nov 12, 2014
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  6. fraifikmushi

    fraifikmushi Guest

    You could add a bass that wouldn't affect the theme at all.
    I made a quick comparison with a different song that is in the same genre and has a comparable spectrum.
    Green is yours, white is Pendulum's Slam.
    If it sounds ok at your place, the first thing you should do is turn down the bass on your speakers. Acoustic treatment comes last because it's likely you damage more than you improve.
     

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  7. Zman

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    You are right. I rechecked and i have more bass on the speakers compared to the track. At that time, when i mixed the track( in some "not to good" philips headphones), it sounded muddy in the low end so i made some corrections to keep it in control but now i think/see it was too much.
     
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    Cool track man!! The thing about bass is just know your headphones or monitors, listen in the same system a pro track and then listen your's on the same system, after that try to reach the same balance. I always make my music with shit "headset" (not even headphone), that's how made it to work.

    Can you give some feedback on my track?

    http://audiosex.pro/index.php?/topic/15034-progressive-house-track-chase-feed4feed/
     
    helder777, Nov 17, 2014
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  9. pacobreak

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    I like it-sound. Nice job :wink:
     
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  10. MiDia

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    not bad brother!
     
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