Whats up my people! I recently did this track and I just wanted to share to see what other producers think. Thanx in advance. I'm also looking for Artists to work with. Hell even other producers. I don't just do this for fun and I take what I do really serious. So with that said give this a listen http://soundcloud.com/publicproductions/sleep-is-for-the-weak

 

Beautiful track man..Here are my comments.

Give a little boost at 100Hz on the kick to make it sit better with the bass line. 1-2dB should do it
At the break at 0:44 maybe automate the bass since it's a little overpowering, do a volume automation so that it slowly comes up from behind the synth and piano. Also you could layer the bass with a nice warm pad sound to give the entire section more emotion, something that it's slightly lacking.
Maybe a snare roll build up or a riser effect to lead into the next section at 1:40

Again, awesome beat, perfect for a nice female vocal and a good rap verse

 

Hey Thanx a lot for the Feedback and for even taking the time to listen. Every Single Day my goal is to make the Quality better and just better my production. So I really appreciate what you said. I will keep all of that in mind for my next track, And yes it was exactly for Hip Hop / R&B Singer. *yes* And your right The Bass Does get overpowering at that point and for some reason didnt even cross my mind I could just automate it. So stupid lol Thanx

 

Very cool atmosphere track.

I think that the comments of 'fuad' will be very useful for your track.