this evenings doodle

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  1. SillySausage

    SillySausage Producer

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    had this melody haunting me over the past couple of days, a quick session this evening, just a rough doodle, but definitely some old school stuff going on here

    http://soundcloud.com/jon-dav-1/if-you-can-you-love-again-1
     
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  3. helder777

    helder777 Newbie

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    This seems to be a kick that should be used in a trance 140 bpm track. Maybe a different kick could suit better you track.

    Well, it's not my type of track, the progression is too much sutile, also thst main lead is playing the melody for too much time.

    Nice guitars!!

    Honestly the song is too much the same, it didn't keep me interested, personally.

    Could you give some feedback on my track? http://audiosex.pro/index.php?/topic/15034-progressive-house-track-chase-feed4feed/

    Thanks!
     
  4. sideshowbob

    sideshowbob Producer

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    :wink: Tanx 4 da share! Really good vibes in there, a DnB Track would be awesome ...
     
  5. brain-s

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    nice track man! i like the guitar riff ;)
     
  6. pacobreak

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    Wooow i like it-sound
     
  7. eboe

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    Hi there,
    I like your mood and feeling in the song ... nice work!
     
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