Well after a couple of frustrating minutes trying trying to make soundcloud's player to appear, i give you a link:SomthngNu
It's kinda my first "serious" song, and i'll manage to finish it. So i would appreciate so much opinions of more experienced people. Thnxx...

 

Gave you a vote.Nice tune.but not my cup of tea.Go down well in gay clubs. and a bit cheesie for me.Its sounds much better than the original.

 

Music might not be my thing, but it's a well mixed track. If it's a first "serious" attempt, basic mixing skills seem to be in order.

 

@BlasterM: yeah i´ve been kinda obscessed with this mixing thing, nice to hear i had some improvement

@Rahjah: what was that?? gay clubs?? hahahaha all right all right, i´ll maybe fix it to make it sound meaner. But i didn´t get the part you said "it sounds better than the original"... is there any previous "original" song to this fresh one i´m workin on?? All i know i got one tiny single sample from one of those libraries, but definetly the melody is my creation. Let me know if i´m wrong

 

Sory that comment was for light toes the remix one from the other. Yours got a nice rythm but its seems like a long loop.chop it up take things out and bring things

 

All right cool. Yeah i´ll do this, that was just the "full" loop of the song that i kept replaying just for get some feedback from people, it sure won´t last that long when the music is finished, i´ll try to post the full lenght song till the end of the week. Thankzzz

 

y, is good. very good, so far as it goes. nice sound. but it needs to do stuff tho? you know, up and down, in and around? ;)

 

Yep, and i´m workin on it right now, hope i can share this job done by the end of the week

 

I have to hear the whole thing to actually give you proper feedback but as everyone else has said the mixing is good but it just being a loop it is really hard to say. A lot of people can make a good 4-8 bar loop but it's what you do with the WHOLE song that really shows what you can do. Sounds good though and would really like to hear what your finished product will be, so keep us updated!!!!!

 

I understand what you say and completely agree with. I´m gettin the song done and it´s gettin very progressive, wich is one thing i like. Well, i´m workin hard on it, as i said before is my first serious attempt, and more, the first i´m willing to finish. Cause you know how tricky can get to finish a song

 

I can hear every element clearly in the mix, nice job.

 

Kool!

 

I don´t know if you´re following this topic but.. anyway i´m posting here the link to the semi-ready track, now it´s gotta a shape, feel free to throw me some criticism. Thnxx!

My link here!!!

 

sounding good, one thing i feel its missing is some sweeps and transition effects, like before the breakdown add a simple noise sweep, doesn't have to be too loud just enough so that people know that the song has transitioned, same goes with other parts of the song too, when you are introducing something new like a synth it's nice to add some kind of effect, like a reverse reverb leading up to the synth. Check this out http://audio.tutsplus.com/tutorials/production/create-a-reverse-reverb-effect/

 

Yeah you're right, i'm just yet not used to all the different elements i can use, but that's a good tipo. Thnkz!!

 

Sounds good. Transition from pt2 into 3 is very good - easily the best part, imo. [@ 2:58 - where the comment from Eklypse is] I'd like to hear more of that, and a shorter pt 1 and 2. ;) At least let's have it twice? It's the best bit! I think that's where the focus of the tune should be too - i find pt1 and 2 a bit frustrating (too long) and then there isn't enough of pt2>pt3 and variation of it. Pt1 and 2 are pretty good, just too long. Pt 3 is really getting going. It's good. More pt2>3 please!! :D

Sounds pretty decently mixed, and sounds pretty good on my (pretty crappy) kit btw.

 

Nice to hear some words from you, i do think you have a point and i´ll sure re-work the begginig, i felt it to be too long also. Thanks for replying.