4th Finished Track, Electro/Dubstep/House.

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Eklypse, Nov 20, 2011.

  1. Eklypse

    Eklypse Newbie

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    As stated, 4th finished production, feedback please >

    http://soundcloud.com/eklypse-1/eklypse-b-tch
     
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  3. Mental Exchange Department

    Mental Exchange Department Newbie

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    I would call it lets dance Disco dubstep bitch. Here is a link to what I think is dubstep http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fg0A8WfR_fs
    I'm not knocking you its just what we think is isnt.I do it all the time but then I dont care. I dont dislike the track slap some caos into it. :wink:
     
  4. mlb4sheaz

    mlb4sheaz Ultrasonic

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    Yep RahJah, dubstep in my mind should be pure filth! with changes in basslines that make you say 'oh mate where the fook did that come from' :)

    Your tunes quite funky though Eklypse :wink:
     
  5. thepopenale

    thepopenale Noisemaker

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    The chorus has potential to be a banger, you have to reduce the level on the second "wub" like the other guy mentioned.

    I like the synth-style percussion at the start.

    The low-fi guitar(?) is also really nice.

    Aside from that I think the main issue is the overall arrangement. The track seems kinda aimless for several sections, you could probably easily cut 30- 60 seconds off the track. Streamline the arrangement and make it feel more purposeful.

    Love that chorus, make it work for me maaaaan!
     
  6. Eklypse

    Eklypse Newbie

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    Yeah I plan to make some major changes to the track after getting some great feedback, taking down certain levels, and making the track more dynamic overall, ty for responses!
     
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