My first soft rock song - Mix inputs please!

Discussion in 'Work in Process' started by krp msuic, Nov 8, 2025.

  1. Lois Lane

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    And the incredible ragtime music of Scott Joplin was brought back for a new generation to enjoy. The great Marvin Hamlisch adapted the music for the film, winning a Grammy. He also is the only composer to win all major American crearive trophies ...an Emmy, Grammy, Oscar, and Tony, what is known as an EGOT.

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  2. AudioEnzyme

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    Yes, absolutely beautiful and timeless
     
  3. krp msuic

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    fireeee
     
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    ok!
     
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    You'll just love it
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    to the OP ... it's very difficult when people post a bit of music on here and ask "what do you think of it?", as no-one, especially me wants to be negative or harsh.

    Everyone has to start somewhere, and I appreciate that most modern day musicians don't play live, and therefore have no way of guaging & refining their material in front of a real audience, which is far and away the best way to get feedback.

    Also, pretty much every songwriter needs to write a whole lot of crap at the beginning until they learn their craft, especially structure & flow. (and most importantly, melody, harmony etc etc).

    If it was finished & amazing, I'd advise you not to post it on here in the first place. Why post an incomplete "song"?

    The riff/motif is ok actually, and some nice little embelishments, but obviously it lacks a vocal, so it isn't a song, just a piece of music.

    It's not terrible by any means, but I'd be more interested in hearing your music a few years from now and not just an incomplete idea.

    Please take this as positive feedback intended to be honest and helpful, and all the best with your music going forward!
     
  7. krp msuic

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    The song is out now guysssss
     
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    sheeesh wierd ok posting the spotify now

     
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    Ofc i appreciate that! i did add the vocals, please do listent to this when u have the time? its out now on spotify.

     
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  11. PulseWave

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    Thank you @krp msuic for your music; it's truly surprisingly fresh and human. Varied and passionately sung.
    You are a great talent, and I hope we'll hear many more songs from you in the future.
     
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    Keith Richards - Hate it when you leave
     
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    thank you so much for your encouragement and kind words pulse wave!! please always stay in touch id love to send u my music newsletters... please send me ur email (if thats ok with you) or drop it on my linktree contact form on my socials so we can always stay in touch!
     
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    Honestly? It builds like a sandwich, then gets heavy, and then it's done. I felt little emotional connection to the music, but noted competency in the instrumentation.
     
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    Not directly related to OP, but relevant to where we all are.

     
  16. krp msuic

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    thansk for the honest take
     
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    so yall i drop a new song every week, heres the last friday release do check it outttt
     
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    ok listened all these songs. i'm 100% positive that they are all AI generated, or maybe some guitar added here and there on it. what do y'all think?
     
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    Compared to the first attempt, this sounds extremely plausible.
    I almost fell for it. Almost.
     
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