She went outside and never came back

Discussion in 'Music' started by Daisy69, Jul 8, 2023.

  1. Daisy69

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  3. Ryck

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    Music to dream or to uplift your soul.
     
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  5. BiG Pluck

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    Mad cool. I frickin' love it. Really makes me miss playing in a band. I really need to get back out on the road!
     
  6. Crinklebumps

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    There's no focal point, no lead instrument/melody. A band desperately in need of a lead singer and actual songs. They're good enough to attract a decent singer and it would up their game 100%.

    I'm being critical but they're decent musicians, they can handle it.
     
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    I think there are two singers. The girl and the drummer but just this song is without vocals. I don't know.
    They reminds me depressive rabbits band.

     
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    It's pleasant enough, but it meanders along and doesn't really go anywhere. I was expecting some kind of climax but it just fizzzles out and the listener is left wanting.
     
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    Sorry, but I find this quite horrible to listen to. It's just the same boring sequence over and over again and they have a hard time singing in tune. On 01:26 and 02:51 it's almost unbearable to listen to.
    Sorry for being honest.
     
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    I noticed they weren't singing in tune but that isn't difficult to fix if they only do backing vocals. I always try to be constructive because I worked live for years and it wasn't easy getting there. We're all at different stages of our careers and most of us learned the hard way, it's just the nature of live performance.
     
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    It's not about fixing. Because fixing the singing won't change the fact that the whole song is just boring. I know how hard it is to perform live and find your space in this world. But there's just nothing going on here that's worth listening to. It's mediocre musicians that are playing mediocre music and also have a hard time singing in tune.
    So sorry, I just can't find the energy to be constructive about something like this.
     
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    I mean fixing in a general sense within the band-dynamic if they had a lead singer, not this tune specifically.
     
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    The singing is bad, and if that's not painfully obvious to them there's issues. That should not have have gone out that way. And if it's bad on purpose, and all ironically, well... I don't get that.
     
  14. Yuri

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    When I originally listened to it on my phone I couldn't hear any singing, I've since listened to it through headphones and can only agree, the vocals are badly out of tune.
     
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    The title of the song is good though!!
     
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    The main problem is the song goes nowhere. I would focus on fixing that. The main principles of post-rock are interesting textures and buildup-climax-release structure. Compare it to this, for example:
     
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