Hey guys I just finished this song. I did all instruments, all in the box and mixed and mastered by me. im pretty proud of this one. and that Roland CR-78 sound ) and some nice new tape delay roland for Nebula (cupwise) hope you like. your feedback are welcomed to make it perfect before giving it to the girl

https://soundcloud.com/patrickpleausound/patrick-pleau-mamoulitas

thanks
Patrick

 

Great track, it seems to me quite narrow in terms of stereo field, lots of instruments are mono, the voice is somewhat heavily processed, I couldn't understand the lyrics.

Otherwise very good instrumentation and EQ! *yes*

 

Thanks for the comments. that was intented to me more low fi and not too much stereo. it give it a vibe and when the chorus (the big mamoulitas) voice the echo is hard panner so since there is plenty of room on the side it makes it bigger and weirder I think. that was my first try on trying to make something less stereo. sometimes it can work great. and some music I liked was often mixed that way. even modern indie stuff..

glad you liked

 

I'd try to give the voice echo both channels, it really is weird when it's just on one side. *yes*
Yet if that was your intention, then well done, it is weird

 

hahha thanks I know what you mean but really I wanted it bit weird to avoid beeing to easy and cheesy of a love song. that touch of non sens of psychaledia kinda fit what im trying to do but I will easy it out. it might just be a bit loud. and you are right about the voice effet I will eq the delay it might help.

thanks again

 

If you guys want to hear the final mix and mastered by a pro. I think it sounds gorgeous hope you guys like it

http://soundcloud.com/patrickpleausound/patrick-pleau-mamoulitas