This is probably one of the "craziest" tracks i've ever made in my life ! (i mean this in a good way)
This is "Journeys",thanks for listening & enjoy ! :

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Edit : * I've added to this thread "Forces" & "Gaia",enjoy ! :

 

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I would actually start the track at 1:35, add a nasty bass and make it something more like a fatboy slim track.
That would make it a good track.
Saturate the piano and layer some fx to give it more personality, add more attitude to the track and you can easily sell it to tv.
Needs a bit more low end, bass-sub bass.

 

Hello @SpyFx ✓, again a surprise from you, yes the man has ideas and is creative. Great job keep it up...!

 

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Thanks for listening man & your kind words ,@BEAT16 i really do appreciate it ,
also thanks for listening to : @hackerz4life @twoheart @realitybytez & @Backtired .

* I've added to this thread "Forces" & edit : "Gaia",enjoy ! :

 

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I enjoyed Journeys. Forces to me is more sound design instead of a song. I like your creativity. On production, I can not comment other than drums seem a little loud in Journeys. Basesound, in the beginning of Journeys, is a bit weak but it all comes down to taste. The only thing I'm missing in both tracks is a melody. The top piano part in Journeys could act like one but is it really a melody (Wonder?)
But like I said: Like the creativity, you put on display and makes me want to sit down and create some too.
Thanx for sharing.

 

I do like "forces"
As @Ed Jachimowicz said it lacks a melody. Therefore it is not a song in a way.
But when I listened to "Forces" I closed the browser to not be distracted. Then I had the feeling to sit in a cinema and watch a movie. Thriller or SciFi... So as an approach to a soundtrack for a film I can imagine that very well.