Dream - new song

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by vaiman, Jan 4, 2014.

  1. vaiman

    vaiman Platinum Record

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    Just finished my christmas tune. Hope you like
     
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  3. fuad

    fuad Producer

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    very nice intro, love the daft punkish vocals there and kind of 80's feel to the song, very funky, nice synth work

    Give it a little shelf boost at around 1-2K Hz to bring out those guitars, and a tiny shelf boost at around 16k Hz to give it a bit of sparkle. It could also use some creative compression to give the song a little pump, which will give it some more energy

    The transition at 2:30 is a little awkward I think, I like what you were trying to do there but it kind of made me feel weird lol, try a low pass filter sweep instead along with a touch of lfo action for a much more interesting effect.

    Great job overall
     
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    Thanks fuad,

    Appreciate the time and comments. I'll have a revisit to the song this weekend and try some of the suggestions out.
    I must admit I rushed towards the end just to "get it done". Another lesson learned lol

    Yeah, I'm on the fence with the sweep. It is actually a pass filter with an lfo using Logic's Autofilter. I'll probably drop it from the final render.

    Cheers :wink:
     
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