This is about 1 minute of whole track.

Any feedback to improve my mix or master will be appreciate.

Cheers,

 

I like it so far.

 

Thanks

It was a wrong cut now I changed uploaded file.

 

think about the bottom end a bit. needs some clarity and the high mids are too harsh. Then there's that thing every refers to as "glue".... you need some of that too.

 

Honestly I checked again and you were right about low end but for high mids I dont get what is your point. And the glue definitely need it.

I have to go back to mix and make these change not fixable by mastering.

Thanks.

 

Where's the Bass?
Zero is not enough, Bass is the foundation so it needs more Bass..

It could be more/less slowly introduced, then make it build up from 0:33 to 0:36,
and then just let it go loose from 0:36.. a good groove can be very a defining aspect of a track.