Construction criticisms are welcome

 

Last edited: Apr 9, 2021

Very nice... Lovely 80s vibe here... Production is solid... Guitars and synths are well arranged and performed... Guitar solo is thrilling... And the singer has a unique voice.

Only suggestion if I had to make one would be to consider adding a harmony backing vocal when the chorus hits.

Good job

 

Together sounds great, well done

 

Last edited: Apr 8, 2021

Thanks for the appreciation Kinghtsurfer you are right in saying that there is no second voice in the chorus

but i used venegance vocal samples and the options are very limited

 

Very very nice.

My CC would be the energy is the same level across the entire song. There should be build ups, as usually done for choruses, and releases. Dynamics. Drums are also fairly static throughout. (Drums are hard to program too, I know!). Various Instruments also seem to have a certain sameness and level sonically to me. Vocals may be a bit too much sitting on top of it all and not 'in' it. Could use double tracking perhaps and harmonies as the other person suggested and appropriate signal processing.

i'm impressed anyone gets a whole tune down. It's a lotta hard work. I'm exhausted just trying to record 8 bars of something then i call it a day, lol

 

Last edited: Apr 8, 2021

Thanks for the appreciation Kinghtsurfer you are right in saying that there is no second voice in the chorus

but i used venegance vocal samples and the options are very limited

 

You could make a copy of the chorus parts and pitch shift it to an appropriate harmony... Just an idea...

 

I realize that your criticisms of the dynamics and balance of instruments and vocals are 100% right. Thanks.