My new trance track

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    Listen my new trance track on Soundcloud
    http://soundcloud.com/rodrigoincloud/serene-emotional-mix :grooves:
     
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    I fixed that SoundCloud link for you so you can have the widget show. To ensure that this happens next time omit the s in https.
     
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    Thanks man!!! It's because I'm new to the forum and this is my first post!
     
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    Not a problem mate. Welcome to the forums. :mates:
     
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    i dont like it but maybe its just me ...what i do like is ''The Next Sun'' track ...deserves a good remix :) or a remake
     
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    Thanks for the tip man! :wink:
     
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    This is a great track dude, maybe just fix up the bass line melody when goes into the main chorus cuz it seems to go out of key a little. But I like it man, well done :)

    And welcome to the forum :mates:
     
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    Thanks bro!!! :bow:
     
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    If you can really perfect this track and get it mastered, we can put it on the AudioSex Album that we're planning to make by the end of the year :wink:
     
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    dont like it because u tried to copy Andy Blueman ...no one beats it but ok ....yes the bass line is weak, nor the snare/clap tail ...use a reverb with predelay on it, play with predelay, the melody in the break is coming somewhat unannounced ...the kick in into the main right after the break is weak, the roll on i barely hear it ...u should do something like u did in the outro when it kicks in, thats acceptable, use some impact fx's or create your own, its easy ...clap snare, reverb delay, filter, lfo modulation, automated eq, there are lots of possibilities ...cheers, sorry for being direct with you in the first post ... if you release ''The Next Sun'' track hit me up for a remix ... check this page: soundcloud.com/soundwavesc CHEERS!
     
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    Yes .. Andy Blueman is a great songwriter and producer and is my inspiration and I try to follow his style despite being very difficult. About the criticisms about the track are very valid. I am new to Ableton, I started for about two months I have a lot to learn! Thanks for the tips man! *yes*
     
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    Wow! Thanks man!!! :wink: I'm working right now on a track on the album already thinking of you. I'll see if I can give one improved in this track, but remembering that I am not a professional, but I'll do my best!!! *yes*
     
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    I'm not either and it's cool man, we all have to start somewhere. *yes*
     
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    Muito bom, Rodrigo. Gostei principalmente da melodia. É dessas que fixam. Parabéns. :grooves:

    Very good, Rodrigo. I especially enjoyed the melody. Congratulations. :grooves:
     
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