A new track. Opinions needed.

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  1. Yellow Raven

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    Dear Friends
    this is a new track. I meant to do a tech house track and I ended up with this. I guess it has an 80's feel vibe to it. but hey 80's is good
    Mixing and mastering is not my cup of tea so suggestions are welcome
    Do you think someone could put lyrics to this ? I mean can it work as a song as opposed to an instrumental?
    anyway I hope you like it

     
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  3. Recoil

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    Soundcloud compression ruined some quality of this track, it's better upload to Bandcamp. Like it :like:
     
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  4. Yellow Raven

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    Yes i don't know why it made it sound like it's phasing and hearing on my cell phone sounds terrible compared to my Rokit 5 KRK monitors.
    thxs for listening
     
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    Or a direct download link of a quality version as a complement of Soundcloud convenient embedded easy listening one.
     
  6. Yellow Raven

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    what do you mean by a direct download link ? it seems i uploaded the MP3 version to soundcloud and it got screwd.
    I can't replace it as i don't have a pro account
    thxs for your help
     
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    Ok, I replaced the track, Sorry for That.
    I think it's better quality now but your opinions matter.
    Much grateful
    Cheers
     
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    Sounds great now :yes: forget the mp3 codec :speaker:
     
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    Much better than the average around here but in minute 3 is already dead. Please reduce the lenght.
     
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    It is not Tech House, more Synth-Pop, Synth Electro Genre, not enough Power and breaks events for Tech House. Drums are 80´style yes, but Synth sounds rather 90 or 2000, nice Melody and stable Track :like:, only the bridging part at 3 Minutes, would start earlier and 2 Breaks in the Middle, Bass Synth add too.
     
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    I mean just sharing a link to an mp3 file that hasn't been reencoded by souncloud. Just like you would share any other file.
     
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    I like it, def can work as a song. Reminds me of this.


     
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    Sweet little track I like it and yes you could put lyrics in this it would fit nicely
     
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    thank you for listening. was thinking the same just couldn't get myself to do it. my bad
    cheers
     
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    I know it's not tech house, I was making the point that I start something intending to do a particular style and end up doing something totally different.
    Thank you for listening and for your thoughts
    regards
     
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    Thank you I am glad you liked it. New Order the good old days. true faith is super good almost forgot about it, downloading
    Cheers
     
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    nice track, like it, not sure what genre, but nice chilled grooves, as for mastering get t racks 5 and do it yourself, nice work
     
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    Thank you for taking the time to listen I am glad you liked it.
    Cheers
     
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    I love this track... it would work great with vocals... if you're willing to let me try adding vocals to it, please pm me... I envision an 80s style pop banger.

    Also, as has been mentioned, its a little repetitive... could use some different sections and changes. Also, perhaps 5 minutes is a little longish.

    Great work! :like:
     
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    Thanks pal for the kind words, I would love a collaboration for sure
     
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