my last track

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by dasandyman, Aug 9, 2013.

  1. dasandyman

    dasandyman Noisemaker

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    Hey Audiosex members :)
    well i wanted to contribute here and posting my last track.
    i hope you guys will enjoy ...

    https://soundcloud.com/dasandyman/how-dare-you

    peace.
     
    dasandyman, Aug 9, 2013
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  3. Baxter

    Baxter Audiosexual

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    Thank you for the music. Hope you will find something new to do after retiring from music production.
     
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  4. fuad

    fuad Producer

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    That is one cool ass track..it may be overcompressed though..the kick is not punching through as hard as it should be so scale back the limiter a bit to let it come through a bit more..even half a dB or 1 dB down might do the track.
    Also I think there's too much reverb going in the song and it's making it sound a bit washed out rather than tight and in your face like I think you intended it to be.
    Cut 1/2 at 5k hZ and give the same amount of boost at around 3-4k Hz...that should make it sound a bit more aggressive as well

    I love the breakbeat mixed with dubstep style and the vocal fits it perfectly with the rest of the track. Very well done.
     
    fuad, Aug 10, 2013
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  5. Pm5

    Pm5 Ultrasonic

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    The song is good.
    You might want another singer. Sh's definitely out of tune.
    The drop has too much pumping, wich make it hard to follow.
     
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  6. Catalyst

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    I think he meant last track he made not the last track he's ever going to make.
     
    Catalyst, Aug 10, 2013
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  7. dasandyman

    dasandyman Noisemaker

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    lol yes :) maybe i should have said latest track :D
     
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  8. Catnaps

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    Greater emphasis should be put on your mixing in my opinion. Your drums reminds me of Zeds Dead http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=upDBkT8ov2Q Keep practicing and over time you will be a great producer in that style/genre. :mates:
     
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  9. dasandyman

    dasandyman Noisemaker

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    thx a lot for the advices :)
     
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  10. delgadilloalex

    delgadilloalex Newbie

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    i love it!

    heard it on my laptop so can't comment on quality.

    but style.............. you do have!

    girl vox she's is trying to hard.
    tell her to relax a little!
     
    delgadilloalex, Aug 11, 2013
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  11. dasandyman

    dasandyman Noisemaker

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    haha no girl voice :p i do sing :p and last time i checked i'm not a girl ;)

    thx for taking time to listen and to comment tho :)
     
    dasandyman, Aug 11, 2013
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  12. thepopenale

    thepopenale Noisemaker

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    Great intro to catch my interest, maybe it drags on a bit too long.
    I like the vocals, great style but they need some polish.
    During the break try and filter some freqs or just lower the volume or something. That way the next verse/chorus will REALLY pop.

    Great track, lots going on. Love all the tweaky glitches. :wink:
     
    thepopenale, Aug 12, 2013
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  13. DivinEvil

    DivinEvil Newbie

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    Very interesting, I like this in a lot of ways, especially the lead break.

    The highend gets a little loud for my taste specifically in the white-noise parts only is my only criticism.
     
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